I think this is a good poem. I guess it's a poet thing to have reality and dreams mix or maybe it's just having the mind of a dreamer. Either way I know where you're coming from and I liked it.

I think it's cool. It makes me think of questioning reality. :) Kind of like my Thoughts of the Mindless poem but in a different way. I'll give it a four because I bet you can do better.

Thank you for your comment on my poem...You are a wonderful poet yourself....

First, I'd like to thank you for your comment. Second, from just reading this one write, I see that you have some very good talent. This write truly makes one sit back and really think.... Well done.

I think it reads well, but I do have a few suggestions that I think may make it flow even better, if you'd like to hear them just private message me.

Again, very well done, keep on writing.... I'll come back and read more!