by Marius Laun Aug 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I no longer sleep |
by Yvonne
Oh my gosh! What a wonderful poem! I had no idea you were so good! Sorry about that. But this poem is beautiful! The flow and word choise were really good. Wow! |
A very emotional love poem. You are able to augment the flow with the combination of rhyming words. Good job. |
by Nix
Very unique poem. Flaw is excellent. Every stanza except the last one is superbly written. |
by Hebe
Good poem. |
by Catie
Oooo-It was vury good...you expressed how you felt amazingly!!! you did awesome. |