I loved your creative use of words, and the way your poems always flow. But this is killin me inside! Just tell her already!!!!!!

I really like it. I'll give it a five. One good thing about doing short poems it gives you a better chance of not messing up. :) There are two things I'd like to point out though. The line: I can't foresee
and end in sight.
Shouldn't it be I can't foresee AN end in sight without a period? I would say you can leave the period in but I looked around and it was the only one with one so I thought it was somewhat odd. You can change whatever you like I'll still give you a five.

I like this poem. the flow wasnt the greatest but it kept me interested, which is sometimes hard to do. there was one stanza that you used "can't" and i thought it would have sounded better with "can not"

Oooo-It was vury good...you expressed how you felt amazingly!!! you did awesome.

Good poem.
Good expressions and flow.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Very unique poem. Flaw is excellent. Every stanza except the last one is superbly written.
-It sounds quite strange
But I can't tell
Whether this feeling's of heaven
or that of hell-
^This is the greatest stanza in whole piece. 5/5

A very emotional love poem. You are able to augment the flow with the combination of rhyming words. Good job.

Oh my gosh! What a wonderful poem! I had no idea you were so good! Sorry about that. But this poem is beautiful! The flow and word choise were really good. Wow!