That was wonderful =) The title is really good - It stands out ^_^ Excellent vocab, it flowed well too, well done.

I like the contrast between the lullaby and the song it has now become thru ur description in every stanza well done

Very beautiful and I loved the structure,, the oem is cohesive all the way :)

A perfect poem for a teenage girl going through a break-up. :] Thanks, I needed to read that. Pfft. Boys, who needs `em right? Lol, you did a great job on this poem, I really enjoyed reading this. :]

5.5

The last line in the first stanza threw off the flow a bit but not much.

In the third stanza, I think it would flow better if you didn't start the line with 'Yet' because you had just used it in the last stanza. And the last line in the third stanza threw the flow off again.

Nice concept but I have to say that, again, I didn't like it. It seemed force and sounded like you only wrote this for a contest or for something else. The flow was awkward and the last line of the poem seemed way forced.