I liked this one. I liked the remorse in it after you knew you'd done something wrong. You kept apologising for it even though you knew it was already over. Keep your head up. Kia xoxo

Really sad, but beautiful poem. Except, there were a couple of mistakes, but it's really good. The ending line wasn't as good either. 4/5

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