by more den just a broken smile Aug 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I told u i'd b there for u |
Hay |
It's very nice, I like it :) 5/5 |
Very short poem yet so meaningful and touching and well written...keep it up... |
by Colourful Mind
Ur writing is very good i shall be reading more of ur work |
Hey. This has a really good theme to it, and it flowed well. I enjoyed it. Thanx for commenting on my poem. |