Longing

Wow this poem had very strong emotion really liked it=)

I love your word play once again. I like how you made pain come to life and how I can visualize it. I would have to say my favorite part is how the blood was soaked up in the cloth. To me it means that pains absorbs whatever it comes into contact with. Good Job.

I love it i feel dat way right now me and my bf jus broke up :[

Wow!! the pain in this poem flows like the blood in a wound. fine, scary, with strength...keep it up you're a great writter, but try to write poems that are happy. i you can. good job =)