I like this poem.... outstanding work... 5/5
~ashley

Its good amber i like it alot and i know exactly what it feels like...5/5

Some drink and some pop pills
I chose the razors but they're all gonna kill
Present and past
The pain continues to last
But I hide my scars and wear a cheerful mask
`Beautifully written stanza . Says so much in so little .

The flow was good, and the rhymes were nicely chosen . I love the ending . It completely works and leaves you to think ; poses a good question that makes you wonder .
Beautifully done .

..__MiNDYY

I love this one wow..i love all of your work...great job!

*100% speechless.* 5/5 . . . . . . *mouth hangs open* WOW.

Wow. IT is really sad. It makes a person start thinking about life. It got me thinking. It is a very depressing poem. But I think that is what you wanted here. The work flowed well and it painted a clear picture,

That was fantastic ^_^ I loved the flow, the expression of emotions were perfect and I totally relate to the feelings behind it ^_^ The best expression of what it's like that I've seen in a long time ^_^ I give it a well deserved 5 =)
Rhea

This is so emotional and very well written

This is so emotional and very well written

Very heartfelt and very true.. unfortunately thats how alot of people look at the world. Great job.

Amazing poem! superb work, pours with emotions and vey deep. I love it! 5/5