It was really good. I could feel that the words came from your heart. 5/5 from me.

Excellent! This piece reflects your ability to twist words and add inflections to make the words poetic and keep the rhymes and rhythm going well. Truely a cohesive and appreciatable poem.

I loved the wordings :)
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^^ Sorry, I'm much of a city girl but this actually made me feel...calm and serene. Great choice of words. 5/5

You made me miss living in AK. I LVOE the city (the noise, the people, the rush) but I really miss the country now. . . Wow. 5/5 Well more like 100/5

Thats a really nice poem. IT is beautiful. It is sort of sad at the end. That is the way the world is

How charming. You capture your theme with an unadorned, yet scenic detail that makes it wholly delightful to read. Your description of a life in the countryside is vivid and succulent. The pitch is seemingly carefree and sentiments raw and well conveyed. I truly enjoyed this piece, Amber.