I've longed to find love
I just thought it would take forever
But you proved me wrong
Because we ended up together
Love is gentle and so are you
Thats why i love you
Most guys are animals
its like they were raised in a zoo
People are going to try to break us in the future
But we won't let them break our love apart
We will fight together
Because together we have the strongest hearts
I use to think we wouldn't last
But now its different
I now know we belong
And breaking our love is something that we will prevent
So forever we will be together
And it will never end
So we will fight through hard times together
And our love will never bend
-We Belong-
Great poem,
i liked the meaning in the poem.
Although, the flow was a bit off,
try to keep a steady rhythm,
also put some punctuation,
i find that a poem without punctuation,
is like a song without a melody.
Great job in all, i know with this site, you'll grow into a wonderful writer!!
keep it up