Comments : Me and myself

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh my god, wow... I speechless. Greatly written flawless and so emotional piece. I can relate to this one, too. It is very deep, and leaves the reader breathless.
    You amaze me with your poems every time.
    5/5, but you deserve more.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -"Escape, flee into the night under a full moon
    Breathe in the fresh air
    You're on your own; you should know that by now"-
    The ending of the poem is amazing, too, it gives extra effect to the whole piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    Keep it up! gr8 work!