Comments : The Break Up

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    OMG I loved this poem. It was filled with so much emotion and feeling that I almost cried.

    "I need my space i want to be free
    Its time to letme go and time for me to be me
    Sorry for the heart ache i love you so
    but now i think its time that i go"

    ^^^^ My favorite stanza. Real good job. keep writing 5/5
    kat