Burdens

by Meme   Aug 2, 2007


You suddenly decide to take off
and you started walking
You don't know where it is
but you can hear them calling

You think you are blind
cause the faces began to fade
You try to remember them
and there are many memories to wade

You went looking for inner peace
but you are going the wrong way
Cause you should shut them away
and never listen to a word they say

You sometimes wonder who
or what is calling you there
Stop for a second and listen
to all the burdens you bear

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© Copyright 2007 by: gIrL
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  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, this poem really touching and discruptive. I sometimes go through the same thing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Keath

    Very good and discriptive poem. I think the last stanza is the best, it's a very good ending. One thing though; I would change the &-sign in 'and', that way it will look better.
    And thank you for your comment. ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    Very good poem :) I love the last stanza...
    You sometimes wonder who
    or what is calling you there
    Stop for a second and listen
    to all the burdens you bear

    self reflection is important :) wondeful job princess :)

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