Comments : Burdens

  • Very good poem :) I love the last stanza...
    You sometimes wonder who
    or what is calling you there
    Stop for a second and listen
    to all the burdens you bear

    self reflection is important :) wondeful job princess :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Keath

    Very good and discriptive poem. I think the last stanza is the best, it's a very good ending. One thing though; I would change the &-sign in 'and', that way it will look better.
    And thank you for your comment. ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, this poem really touching and discruptive. I sometimes go through the same thing.