One More day

by Loved In Hell   Aug 2, 2007


*copyrighted lyrics*

Last night I had a crazy dream

A wish was granted just for me

It could be for anything

I didn't ask for money

Or a mansion in Malibu

I simply wished, for one more day with you

One more day

One more time

One more sunset, maybe I'd be satisfied

But then again

I know what it would do

Leave me wishing still, for one more day with you

First thing I'd do, is pray for time to crawl

Then I'd unplug the telephone

And keep the TV off

I'd hold you every second

Say a million I love you's

That's what I'd do, with one more day with you

Leave me wishing still, for one more day

Leave me wishing still, for one more day

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Aw, this is so beautiful. It had a lot of emotion in this. Great choice of words. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Hello Laura,

    I miss our talks... hope you are well.

    Mr M.

  • 17 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    Deliciously writen! It begs me to crave more, it was really out-standing. Awesome song there, I really enjoyed pretending to sing it well, whilst I was reading =] Keep it up missy!

  • 17 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    I have a question who wrote the song?
    it was great though

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwwwwwwwww. somethings are expressless. i think this is such a nice poem and there is no word to explain this nice work. you realy respect the words. i am happy that i read this poem. i will read more of your poem becoz i think thery would be all nice like this. i have added u in my favourites.
    and you deserve 5/5
    takecare

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