by Birgit
This poem really reflects how you feel, but in the first stanza, it reflects it a little too much because of the exclamation marks.. ;] maybe just less of those would do good. |
by Corruption
Great poem |
by The Undoing
Really powerful poem, |
Nice. i liked it. great flow and rythm. good word choice. 5/5 |
This poem kind of confused me. I don't know what it was, I just can't put my finger on it. 4/5 |
by RobinAnn13
Very effective and good choice in words! Good choice of title as well! <3 |