I really enjoyed your poem. I could really understand and feel what you are saying. Great Job and keep up the good work. Please check out some of my work, i would really appriciate the comments to help me out. Thanks

This was so cute! Great poem. Read some of my stuff (pz) and I look forward to seeing more from you. You have talent! 5/5

Aww a lot of ppl can relate to this. it was very cute!!! You have a very nice rhythm

Awww it was so cute!!!
i can remember my first kiss... it was awesome!!
gr8 job!!
5/5
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