Great poem! actually!!!! great messege! i hope it crosses the peoples minds who read it! n e wayz i loved it!

The message behind this is so strong.
it really impresses me..i love the fact that you took the time to write about this..and i hope people get that message.
this line especially blew me away:

"Live not for themselves but for those they wish to impress"

that is so stong and very truthful.
i believe we are all perfect the way we are..cause those small imperfections make us that much better..they make us real (not a machine).
great job on this!
keep writting because i can tell you are great at it. and it's also a healthy way to release emotions.
--Viola