Wow I love this poem, I love how you used words specially this

Allow me to savor this very moment
Cherish the sweetness it offers
Taste the nectar of this blissful time...
While you're still with me

I love the flow and the rhyme, great poem very well penned keep it up

gene Ross

Wow I can relate to the situation 4/5 nice poem

I can really relate to this. it is heartbreaking to watch them go back to the other girl. nice work. 5/5

Aw I really like the message in this poem.. To be honest I feel the same.. except I'm a boy lol.

Anyway it flowed nicely, good job. I really adore the ending =)

Keep up the good work!

The flow of this was nice, I liked the message portrayed it was beautifully sad in its very own way. I'm sure so many people can relate to this piece. Well done on creating this keep up the good work ~mel

This poem was very good, I really liked the story behind it. You did a great job, the flow was really well done and your emotions really showed. Great job!

Line did it for me to be honest, strong opening
also liked the idea of kissing the sky
that was beautiful
great poem
5/5

Very very nice. Could feel the desire that the girl was feeling towards that boy. Anyone could relate to this so it touches many people.
Great work! 5/5

Very emotional poem. I like it.

Really liked your poem..it's a sad motive to go on, the fact that we cannot have what we want 5/5

I liked the brevity and pithiness of this piece. But I think you should have replaced 'coz' with because. Using the word 'coz' takes away the formality of the poem.

I know how it feels to love a male frien and he with someone else, i live it every day its not fair but sometime it just means there is someone better for us out there, just a matter of waiting, and im still waiting,, but i love the poem 5/5

Omg i love this poem is so cutee

I cn relate to this poem its sad and beautiful that we know not everything turns out the way it should
but finding what you believe to be you true love and then seeing them walk back into the same persons arms over and over again it hurts
5/5

Beautiful poem, i can relate to this one.. i loved how you worded it and everthing. Great work 5/5
xx

Very heartbreaking, but nicely written.
I'ts a good poem, the only thing i didn't like about it was that your using the word "coz".
"Because" sounds better and for the flow of the write it's a better suiting. "Coz" kinda distracted me.
Other then that i really enjoyed reading it :)

4/5

xo angelique