by blueknight Aug 2, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Finding the living piece of my heart |
by Riley
Lol nice, I like the last stanza. |
by Bryan
Yep yep, this was awsome gene, been waiting for a new one and it tis great, love the flow so its a flawless 5/5!!! keep them coming man!!! |
by ECILA ice
Hey love the content of this one and how your imagination works, on how you describe your feelings is great too..as in wow!!I can say that every words really comes from the heart.keep it up tsong! =) |
The middle and end captured me 5/5 very nice poem |