The middle and end captured me 5/5 very nice poem

Hey love the content of this one and how your imagination works, on how you describe your feelings is great too..as in wow!!I can say that every words really comes from the heart.keep it up tsong! =)

Yep yep, this was awsome gene, been waiting for a new one and it tis great, love the flow so its a flawless 5/5!!! keep them coming man!!!

Lol nice, I like the last stanza.
It's got a jumbled structure, it sort of adds to the poem. It's very cool.
Could've hit the rhymes harder, but I like the words choosen.
Very good.

4/5