I love it, it has real feeling of the real world. we all feel like this sometimes, you put it in words we couldn't find.

i have a new, long poem, All of Our love, check it out if you want

~Jerbear

Wow thats a really gr8 poem keep it up!!!

Rachel

Its sad and (i find) sweet in a way i like it a lot its really good its short but then again poems can be long and short