"The restless wind beckoned today,
Come, come ride the open road,
With nary a thought, I'm on my way,
Leaving cares behind, rid of such a heavy load"

These lines to me really made the poem! 5/5

This is a really good poem! You are selling yourself short by saying your poems are not so good!
Keep up the gr8 work!

5/5 Ingrid

I like this form as well as the way this poem is written. POems about nature are always soothing but its even more better when the poet writes with such grace..excellent write!