To My Soldier~Manda

by Mandz and Aly   Aug 2, 2007


I'm what you think of every night before you fall asleep
I'm the feeling in your heart you want to keep
I'll always stay in your arms
It's just about the only place I don't feel harm
I love you baby boy your every thing to me
You're everything I love to see
I want to fall asleep with you
I want all of our dreams to come true
I want to wake up every morning to you there
Baby boy I know just how much you care
Through all of the fights and all the crying
I know your are doing everything and trying
I can't wait to see you baby when I'm safe with you
And when all this waiting for you can be through

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this showed a great love which was written so greatly, keep up the great work as you are so talented.

    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    How cute. It is a neat piece to offer to your beloved as a tribute. You did well to make the loving emotion apparent throughout: it's sweet and engaging. Perhaps applying punctuation marks will augment the flow? Then again, it's a nice one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Thats such a sweet poem! i really liked it keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    I really enjoyed your poem. I could really understand and feel what you are saying. Great Job and keep up the good work. Please check out some of my work, i would really appriciate the comments to help me out. Thanks

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