I really enjoyed your poem. I could really understand and feel what you are saying. Great Job and keep up the good work. Please check out some of my work, i would really appriciate the comments to help me out. Thanks

Thats such a sweet poem! i really liked it keep up the good work!

How cute. It is a neat piece to offer to your beloved as a tribute. You did well to make the loving emotion apparent throughout: it's sweet and engaging. Perhaps applying punctuation marks will augment the flow? Then again, it's a nice one.

Wow, this showed a great love which was written so greatly, keep up the great work as you are so talented.

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it