by Dan Aug 2, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
My love, my all, my endless desire, your sweet angelic face makes me feel lighter. Blonde hair like spools of gold, blue eyes like sapphires, what is the key to your heart? |
It's just cuteness...truly :) |
by Dan
No she hasnt. No1 really thinks im the poetry guy coz i look like a rugby player hahaha. I think it would creep her out a bit |
by Dan
Also, I know I've wrote some explicit poems but its more of an art form so please dont take it like thats my personality. |
by Dan
Thanks buddy, and dont worry i understand exactly what your saying. This girl anyway, has broken my heart a few times, but i keep trying anyway. |
by Britta
Hey Dan, this is a good poem & you are young but i guess thats a good thing because ..maybe im not the only one to tell you but this girl will not be the only love of your life. she may be your first, which is always the best and you will never forget her and how she made you feel...etc. and you will get hurt in life from people that you might not think would hurt you and sometimes life just sucks! which you will most likely experience as you get older and older lol! you should write more poems because im sure you have alot inside of you that could be expressed in poems!! also...its not crap! im in a bit of a deep mood...so dont take any of that as a lecture or anything! ... haha! ok im going now!! have a good one mate!! Britt |