My pleasure to read this Beautiful penned...writing within beautiful emotions. from the lover to the lover, yet longing someone... so sad, i hope things are good with you..take care, Bert.

June
Beautiful poem. I hope someday your dream comes true.
Take Care Cindy

This was adorable.
Your emotion is really strong.
Your flow was kinda. iffy, but still a beautiful poem.

For too long this has been my dream ,
and I am aching for it come true.

These lines, were a perfect ending for this peice. Beautiful!
Great job!
5/5

XxAmberxX

WOW WOW WOW all i can say is i really really feel u on diz poem, i feel da same i love it keep da good work up........

Omg this was an amazing poem, and i would be honored if you would come take a look at my poem and give me feedback. i would greatly appreciate it from you♥

Wow. I realy enjoyed this poem. I have a few you might like.