by Dan Aug 2, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Life, Love, Lost, Found. |
by Nix
It should be a little longer and deeper but it isn't bad. You created interesting atmosphere and I like the topic. |
by Dan
I see... I add stories to some but they turn out like narratives sometimes |
by Dan
OK ill keep that in the fore-front of my thinking in future poems |