Very nice poem and i like the format 5/5

Rage eating away at me as you rub suggestively against her hips
I'm supposed to be the one you love, so how can you do this?

This poem is BRILLIANT but this here^^ is what really spoke to me.
Things with my bf are more than perfect now, I no longer have any doubts. But his friend and his gf are always fighting - always on and off. He cheats on her, she cheats on him etc etc. and these lines are what reminds me of that and how I never want that to happen to me again. It brings up old insecurities that I once had, but now don't and they really speak to me.
I love this poem. It's great. I've never read a Rondeau before and I like it. No. I LOVE it.
Awsome job 5/5
much love .xx

Amazing! Really nice format to use. Emotional and topic that you used, I think everyone can relate to it, so makes it touching. Flawless just! Really blew me away :)!
5/5