This was such a beautiful poem, really beautiful.
However, it would be read a lot easier if you split it up into stanza's or line breaks after each stanza, as it's a bit clumped together like that making it harder to find breaks and a rhythm
Beautiful all the same
5/5
*Gem*

I really enjoyed your poem. I could really understand and feel what you are saying. Great Job and keep up the good work. Please check out some of my work, i would really appriciate the comments to help me out. Thanks

Yes i will fix my poem later and thanks for your kind comments