Aww nice but in the end no1 can really help you only you can help and understand yourself!

Very emotional.
Great piece of writing over loss.
Take care

Wow a wonderful piece with overflowing mournful feelings cohesively and coherently strung together. This is a great piece i loved the word choice and the flow was exceptional 5/5

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Fsams

Its a good poem would be betta if it rhymed...

i herd bout that an it saddend me.. i wanna die. but i agree. its the easy way out mayb thats why ims till here

Its a good poem would be betta if it rhymed...

i herd bout that an it saddend me.. i wanna die. but i agree. its the easy way out mayb thats why ims till here

Well sorry to say this but.. This poem didn't really pulled me in.. Maybe if you rhymed in this poem that would be better.

Anyway It's really good for you to dedicate this poem for the two young girls.. I really like the message of this poem.

4/5
Keep up the good work

Wow this is so sad...and its nice that you decided to write a poem about those two girls... and you're right..suicide is simply the easy way out...your message really got across...and i think if people who read this had thoughts before about suicide this would probably(hopefully) change their mind...

excellent job! definately a 5/5 from me.

This poem is very sad and yet very touchng although the flow wasnt the best it truelly made me shed a tear and thts worth bonus points any one that can make me cry is truelly gifted
still a 5/5