"I want you to love me
as I do love you
I want you to trust me
that I won't break your heart in two"

Such a beautiful heart felt little poem.
It was so cute, and spoke such volumes, i wish all love was sweet like this
5/5
*gem*

Beautiful penned, writing well within beautiful emotions.....lovely yet so heartfelt... well done!

Hihi =]
Cuteee ^_^ It really shows how you feel about this person =)
5/5

Well it was a good poem =) Just a suggestion.. Uhm.. try to eliminate some of the I's coz it will mess the flow. =)

Anyway keep up the good work
Thanks for the comment! =)

The seeming sincerity of the substance is captivating. It rings a bell with me, actually. x] Nothing much to comment about, other than the emotions were raw and well expressed and the tone of voice loving and quite passionate. Bittersweet write.

Hi. A really nice, polished work. A talented writer you are! Keep it up! xox

Wow a beautiful piece, you keep, on amazing me
well done if there was such a score you would get
10/5

Its alright a nice piece but would be better if it was longer and with more feeling too

Written in a very refreshing way, loved the way u potrayed ur feelings...keep writing

all the best and take care

Such a nice poem. I liked the simplicity of it and the mood. great job

Wonderful&romantic .your style is awsome

//* Beautiful Poem. This is the first I've read of yours and it is simply amazing. Such a sweet love was portrayed here and it was very precise. The flow was great also.

Keep it up && Take Care,,*

-Shannon <3

Nide poem i trusted my ex not 2 break my heart but he brok it but i like this poem

Excellent, the message is very clear in this piece and I loved it. What you wish and desire is nicely explained in this piece 5/5 all the way
Tc
Fsams

Brilliant.. just brilliant.. damn relatable .. a job damn nicely done.. a definite 5/5

keep it up

~Wake~

Very heartfelt,it is so hard to trust these days but it sounds like he could trust you.very well done.

Hey, this is excelent! beautiful writing, and it kinda inspired me, i have been having a hard time writing poems lately but this kinda gave em a boost! B E A U T I F U L
i gave it a 5/5

~barbi

I think you nailed what everyone wants in a relationship but rarely ever says. Honest and sincere

Once again I like this one... Very Briilient Work.... ) Keep It up...:)

Great....