Claps* 5 :)

I loved how you took one element of nature, and turned it into a metaphor for something bigger. BRILLIANT!

I love the sea*lol*but I live in the middle of nowhere so I don't get to see it very often.But this was a good poem.5/5

Great ... i liked that .. and totally agree with "Vodka"

looking forward for more ^^

~Wake~

Great ... i liked that .. and totally agree with "Vodka"

looking forward for more ^^

~Wake~

I thought it was amazing. i loved the way you expressed it in your words, everything was perfect, nice work. keep it up 5/5

This piece was also quite good, you pulled off a nature poem really well and it ended up to be an enjoyable read. I liked the flow it was great. Nature to me is hard to write about and actually make it good but if you do it then you have talent and this you did. A great effort. ~mel

This piece is greatly written. Flaw is excellent and atmosphere that you created with powerful wording is incredible. 5/5

This is quite interesting. Very enjoyable to read. Again, I like the use of elegant words. You put it all together perfectly. 5/5

This one is really good, not my favorite one of urs, but yet, it is really good!!! some of the rhyming seemed forced. good job! :o]