Comments : Stormy Love

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    WOW this piece really drew me in, which is hard for free verse to do. There were so many parts that I really liked. This was one of my fav...

    if salt and pure can mix,
    why cant we?
    it's not so far-fetched,
    not so silly.

    wow!
    Great imagery and heartache...
    Charisma*+

  • 17 years ago

    by natalie

    OMG this poem is brilliant great wrk