Nice write. The poem itself is akin to an excitable rant of emotional steam. The pitch and rhythm set off a hurried pace which is seemingly rough and forceful, whereas the emotions raw and well versed. As for the substance, well, you have a point.

"No matter if words are meaningless,
They still burn and scorn."

^ Dead right. Yelling at living beings does tend to kill the spirit in them, as Robert Fulghum states, "Sticks and stones may break our bones, but words will break our hearts..."

Nice piece, nevertheless. I truly enjoyed it. All the best and take care. ~Marian.

I thought the poem was ok, i mean it could be better
but the emotion and the anger put
into it was really good
it flowed pretty well
and i liked the ending.

but sumthing that always catches my eye is when people use the word "crumble"
alot of people use that word, and maybe
you could try a different word there

but nevertheless it was good

i give it a 5/5

All in all the poem was pretty good but truthfully it didn't really keep my attention.Umm..but the emotion in it was pretty understandable for most poeple if not all.so I can't give you a 5/5 on this one but it was still ok so 4/5

Wow, I'm really suprised at other peoples comments. I thought this poem was amazing, it was truthful and I'm sure is coming from the heart or experience.

"No matter if words are meaningless,
They still burn and scorn.
Try thinking before attacking.
Open up the ears and listen to the screams,
Of all those broken dreams."

Great way to end the poem, I believe it makes people consider thinking of the consequences and repercussions of what they say. The simplicity of words is deceiving, they can hurt people so deeply. Loved this poem. Take Care:)

It was a okay poem for me.. I like the other two better. I think to improve this you should add.. some emotions in it. 'I think'

Nonetheless a good read. ^_^

I think this is really good..i like it..and its great that you could write about something like this..but i just felt like it was missing something..not sure what...maybe add a little more feeling into it...4/5 on this but its still good.