Hope

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Aug 2, 2007


Choppers buzzing in the air,
As chaos scrambles upon the ground.
Screams of terror breaks the sound.

Pleas of help reach ears of saviors.
Struggling to save lives of strangers.
Praying that the last string doesn't snap.

So much effort in a world of horror.
Trying to save the purest thing; a life.
Gives us hope for a brighter future.

Hope, the strongest concept ever created;
By endless dreams and possibilities.
Makes one think that everything will be alright.

Keep hoping, dreaming, and praying
For those that continue to struggle upon this earth.
Powerful words beyond anything imaginable.

*inspired by the lost lives in Minnesota, all the loved ones are in my prayers.*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was really good, I liked the meaning behind it all. Yet your flow was a bit off in this one.
    But i really loved this stanza

    "So much effort in a world of horror.
    Trying to save the purest thing; a life.
    Gives us hope for a brighter future."

    You did great!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    ^^not to be rude but i think punkboy is completely wrong....

    this poem is great...hopes and dreams are what make this world a great place to be... and this certainly doesnt deserve to be down voted....and it was not too short...even if it was(which its not) there was enough meaning behind it to make it great...this deserves a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Amazing poem!! dunno what to say!!
    its beautiful!! well done
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This poem is really beautiful... the flow was a bit off in places but overall the message was strong and the word choice was nice.. great job :D

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