This poem is really beautiful... the flow was a bit off in places but overall the message was strong and the word choice was nice.. great job :D

Amazing poem!! dunno what to say!!
its beautiful!! well done
5/5

^^not to be rude but i think punkboy is completely wrong....

this poem is great...hopes and dreams are what make this world a great place to be... and this certainly doesnt deserve to be down voted....and it was not too short...even if it was(which its not) there was enough meaning behind it to make it great...this deserves a 5/5.

This was really good, I liked the meaning behind it all. Yet your flow was a bit off in this one.
But i really loved this stanza

"So much effort in a world of horror.
Trying to save the purest thing; a life.
Gives us hope for a brighter future."

You did great!!