by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Aug 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm sitting here alone with Mr. Heartache and a bottle of whiskey, |
by Mommy And Me
Another amazing piece dear, i loved the flow and the emotion behind it. you were painting a picture in my head and wow did it ever shine. ... good work once again deary |
by aDORKable x3
Jenna! I love this one! It's amazing! The use of the free style made this poem, I believe, even more realistic. This was some of the best work I have seen from you. You are an amazing writer and I'm enjoying all your work. This one especially had some great imagery; I could really follow the whole thing. :) |
by Tara Kay
It flowed so well, and i loved this freestyle poem. the emotion, the vivid imagery you created. An awesome piece, my friend |
by Bryan
I like how you did it jenna, even without the rhyme it has great flow, loved it!!! keep them coming babe!!! |