I like how you did it jenna, even without the rhyme it has great flow, loved it!!! keep them coming babe!!!

It flowed so well, and i loved this freestyle poem. the emotion, the vivid imagery you created. An awesome piece, my friend
love Tara-Kay

Jenna! I love this one! It's amazing! The use of the free style made this poem, I believe, even more realistic. This was some of the best work I have seen from you. You are an amazing writer and I'm enjoying all your work. This one especially had some great imagery; I could really follow the whole thing. :)

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Another amazing piece dear, i loved the flow and the emotion behind it. you were painting a picture in my head and wow did it ever shine. ... good work once again deary