Stars?

by luv Shelbz luv   Aug 2, 2007


A burning ball of gas
Millions of miles away
In outer space

Or maybe
Passed on loved ones
Guiding us on life's journey
Helping us to remember them

Or maybe
Comforts when our hearts have been broken
And we think we can't move on
Just giving us hope toward tomorrow

Or maybe
Dreams coming true
For people who have worked hard
All their lives coming true

Or maybe even
Happy moments
Reminding us to think the best of life
And to be all we can be

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Its a very good poem.,
    I love hw you took something so plain like stars and made a whole poem out of it.
    Xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This idea behind this was unique I liked it alot. Different and unusal but that is what got my attention loved how you explained things really interesting from start till finish. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Aw, this a beautiful poem. A real pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. 5/5

    marcella