Incomplete

by luv Shelbz luv   Aug 2, 2007


Excuse me
Do you have a band-aid
So I can aid my broken heart

You see
When he left me
He tore it apart and it still hurts

I think
Maybe he took some of it
Because it doesn't feel complete

And
Do you happen to have flowers
To fill my empty vase

My vase
Used to be full of flowers
Until he left without a single one

They always
Looked so pretty
But now the vase only collects dust

And by the way
Would you happen to be single?
Because I have nothing else to do now

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Lol, I loved that poem.
    It was sad, but yet still had some humor.
    keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Ha ha, clever little poem =)

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    The end part was funny but i don't think the rest of it was. it seems like a sad poem until the last 3 lines. but i found the last part funny so i give you a 5

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah roediger

    Thats true dats wot i felt when my baby left me i want that 2 happen 2 me

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    At first it seemed really sad, I was thinking to myself hmm this isn't funny it's heartbraking. The end was great though I liked it. Well written I must say. Good effort ~mel

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