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  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Lol. I thought it was kind of strange until I read the last line. That can be taken in so many ways. <_<
    >_>
    I'll give it a four for surprising me in the end.

  • 17 years ago

    by Riz

    Not bad...I didn't find it funny until the end. It made me laugh. Though, I think you should add more funny stuff than just one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    At first it seemed really sad, I was thinking to myself hmm this isn't funny it's heartbraking. The end was great though I liked it. Well written I must say. Good effort ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah roediger

    Thats true dats wot i felt when my baby left me i want that 2 happen 2 me

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    The end part was funny but i don't think the rest of it was. it seems like a sad poem until the last 3 lines. but i found the last part funny so i give you a 5

  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Ha ha, clever little poem =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Lol, I loved that poem.
    It was sad, but yet still had some humor.
    keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey