Lol. I thought it was kind of strange until I read the last line. That can be taken in so many ways. <_< |
by Riz
Not bad...I didn't find it funny until the end. It made me laugh. Though, I think you should add more funny stuff than just one. |
by Melpomene
At first it seemed really sad, I was thinking to myself hmm this isn't funny it's heartbraking. The end was great though I liked it. Well written I must say. Good effort ~mel |
Thats true dats wot i felt when my baby left me i want that 2 happen 2 me |
by nikki
The end part was funny but i don't think the rest of it was. it seems like a sad poem until the last 3 lines. but i found the last part funny so i give you a 5 |
Ha ha, clever little poem =) |
by Chelsey
Lol, I loved that poem. |