It's a good idea. I like it. 4.

This was unique. I really liked this poem. Wonderful rhymes and flow. Keep writing! 5/5

marcella

To me this wasn't my favorite by you. It just didn't seem upto your usual standards. Although cute I'm not sure many people of an older age would relate to this I know I can't I just didnt feel the emotions. A good effort though. ~mel

If bears could talk that would be great for us all. great poem really good wording and the rythm of it good

I loved the poem..
It was good, and so true.
And if only bears could talk right?
=]
But the stanza's have different number of lines in each one.. I would have tried to get the same amount in each line.
But its still a very good poem.
xoxo
--Chelsey