Yeah I have a few poems complaining about the world too. I don't remember their titles though but oh well. I'll give it a 3 because I just wish there was a little more zip to it to get the readers attention.

You capture your theme with an unadorned, yet sound detail that makes it wholly pragmatic. It further seems to me to be an excitable rant of emotional steam, reminding me of a certain someone bewildered by the world's current situation. Severely captivating to say the least. All the best and take care. ~Marian

This is a good poem
i still like the first one i read today the best lol
great job
you wrote this well
and great topic also
good job

Keenan

This is a powerful write. I think everyone can relate to this. It's full of truth. I really enjoyed this piece. 5/5

marcella

I did like the overall meaning of this poem which you portrayed although my intention just wasn't fully grabbed not like your other poems it seemed to simple to explain the world and life which is complex. More details would make this better. ~mel

I agree.
The world has gone to hell in a hand basket.

This was a good poem.
and it made me, and probably many other people, think about what is actually going on in our world.
xoxo
--Chelsey