Scars

by luv Shelbz luv   Aug 2, 2007


As little toddlers
tripping and falling
get scraped knees
and crying

As clumsy kids
Falling down
during a game of hopscotch
And giving a frown

As in grade school
Not getting our way
And throwing a fit
Kicking and pouting all day

But the worst
Is as you grow older
And getting you heart broken
Is the worst hurt

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This is a good poem.
    Not your best.. but its not your worst, as far as i'm concerned you dont have a worst peom.
    anways.
    it was a good poem.. it was short and sweet, and sometimes thats all you need to get your point acrossed.
    yet again another one of your good poems.
    xoxo
    ---Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by LiNa

    Very true and good insight

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    True and good

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Hey this is a good poem
    not quite as good as the first one i read
    but this is still great
    it has a good flow to it:D:D

    good job
    Keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This poem is a great write
    it had a great flow
    and the general idea of it was great

    a short poem
    but the message was obviously clear
    but its so true
    and i love the concept

    great job

    5/5

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