Thats is so true!! nice poem, good work 5/5 =]

Cute how you worded it, but sad lines. another 5/5

Fine write. Though I do not concur with the insubstantial ending. "Each of us, at some time, has suffered from someone deceiving us--perhaps someone we loved. We should not let that stop us. Lovers know the pangs of unrequited love, but there is so much truth to the saying, "It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.""

Be not afraid, neither be dismayed. Rather, be strong and have a good courage to face life. All the best and take care. ~Marian.

This poem is a great write
it had a great flow
and the general idea of it was great

a short poem
but the message was obviously clear
but its so true
and i love the concept

great job

5/5

Hey this is a good poem
not quite as good as the first one i read
but this is still great
it has a good flow to it:D:D

good job
Keenan

True and good

Very true and good insight

This is a good poem.
Not your best.. but its not your worst, as far as i'm concerned you dont have a worst peom.
anways.
it was a good poem.. it was short and sweet, and sometimes thats all you need to get your point acrossed.
yet again another one of your good poems.
xoxo
---Chelsey