At first I thought it wasn't that great but I kept reading and I love how when she uses up something she goes to another. I love the ending too. It takes a sad poem and makes it a nice one. I give it a five.

It was really hard to get into, and i oringinally thought that it was a very basic poem, however after reading it; i realised that there was a message, prehaps maybe that it is only m interpretation, however from your words the message i recieved was that dullness will never complete us, but neither will pain; and as both of them will never work they really shouldnt ever be together. Prehaps like fighting fire with fire, only makes a bigger fire. Fighting dullness [bordom] with pain, only makes an unhappy incomplete person.
I enjoyed this poem, it was a clear easy read, with a good flow, that held an important message
5/5
xxx

Two words.. LOVED IT! 5/5 :P

Enjoyed this alot... i love how you went from one to the other like that... good story, nicely written!!
<3ang
5/5

Emo?
idk but no offense i didnt realy like it. i no others will now yell at me, but i cant get into something if i cant flow with it.
i will not rate on the actual thing, but here i give a 4/5

THE STORY ROCKED THOUGH

Heya
this was amazing!!!
i love it
it was soo good
it grabs you attention right away
and holds it till the end
great job:D:D

Keenan

I'm not too fond of the topic, but it is still a great poem. The flow flow was nicer that some of the other poems I've read. I do have one suggestion though, in the 3rd stanza where you used the word worthless a second time, try using another word [synnonym maybe]. I think it would be perfect then. 5/5

marcella

At first i didn't think much about it.. But then i read between the line's and realized that you were trying to send some sort of message.
Like, you were trying to say.. that everyone is going to fail and fail and fail, but eventuallyy we end up getting it right and it ends up okay in the end.
atleast i hope thats what you were trying to say??
anyways.
all n' all it was good.
keep writing.
I've said that so many times, but its true.
xoxo
--CHelsey