I have to applaud you . That was brilliant . A strong and beautiful message to send out, and such flow was consistant and the rhyming was just ... amazing . Great choice of words, and the meaning is so true .

Beautifully written .
..__MiNDYY

Holy crap man got anymore?! A+

Great poem.
Love the message.
Good flow, word choice and rhyming.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Wow i love the vocabulary used in this poem. It's great u make it work. and the message is cool too. i want to read some more of yours!!!

This a great pice of poetry. The was actually meaning to it and a great message. Wonderful word choice made for a pleasant flow and great rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

marcella

Aweehh. Words can`t even begin to explain how much I loved this! You wrote it perfectly. The flow was spot on, the wording was amazing; and it really pulls the reader into what it is saying. It`s not one of those poems that you read and half way through remember that you`re reading and have to go back and re-read the whole dang thing! Lol, good job Darling, really.

5.5
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Amazing. And it was flawless because it sounded like you were conveying a message while writing for yourself, not for your reader. You told the truth about something and the true meaning behind a word. Loved it. Excellent write, and I have to say it was one of the best poems you've written. Pleasure reading it :)