I thought this was an amazing poem
i dont think it was cliche at all
i liked how u explained that drinking
and pills arent your calling
and everything
and then the way you talked about others
thinking its cliche

and i though the endng was great

a well deserved

5/5

Wow, amazing poem
i used my razor for every time im sad, but i stopped coz it leaves ugly marks and my bf made me stop!! sometimes i still feel like cutting but i just think of what my bf said...
anyways, gr8 poem!!
wonderful job!!
5/5 =]

This is AMZING!!!!!You have geart ability!! And i know how you fell. You are putting parts of my life in words. The parts i haven't gottin to yet. You are on of my fav. A big 5/5

Wow...That was amazing..I'm speechless...

haha..Wow....That had alot of emotion..

I loved the ending...It was so right...

5/5... =]

That was amazing 5/5

That was very well writen, as the person befor said this allready I'm going ot say it again, I liked how you point out that pills and drinking was not your calling..
I allso liked the the person was still and willin got help anyone in need even tho she/he was in a troubled times.... good poem 5/5

That is GREAT! I love the part about cutting is your anti-suicide. I've tried to explain that to my boyfriend and he just gets mad.
but. that was just...Im speechless. =]

keep writing. awesome poem.
<3

5/5

I really like this one! kinda sad but very good

The word choice is beautiful and the way you have structred makes it cohesive and coherent with the caption. Very nice work

Tc
Fsams

This is. . . Well I. . . You write. . . . And it's. . . . WOW. I dunno what to say. It's so . . .Perfect. 1,000,000,000/5

Wow.. very depressing...this is really good and if this is something you're going through im so sorry...

"Drinking's not my calling
Pills are not my friend
So I'll use this razor
Until the very end"

that is my favorite stanza....really good poem. you're a great writer.

My fav i think!! you write how i feel not just you <3

You are an awesome writer! i loved this! It was so sad but so gooooodddd....i love it! keep up the good work! Perfect poem! I so know what you mean about cutting as an anti-suicide...thats what i do to...this poem was just really awesome! 10!

This is very touching, from the beginning to the end. You express the emotions in your poems in a great way with very good wording and powerful descriptions, and this piece is not an exception.

5/5

Wow.. another wow.. my bestfriend can really relate to this.. everytime he's sad coz of a girl, he cuts himself with anything sharp... i can't believe a lot of ppl do this.. anywayz i like how u told ur story.. the way u describe wat ur doing.. i can really imagine it happening.. another fantastic poem!

It's nice and I understand you completly,

most people think cutting is for emo's.. I don't think that's the truth?

Cause I'm not an emo....

But that poem is perfect, and not cliche

See ya later.. Flynel

It's nice.

Most people think cutting is for emo's, I don't think that's the truth? They really don't know what life is...

And that poem let it see how it is,

I like it ;)

Byee <Flynel>

This poem is totally me...everything about is exactly me...i think you're an awsome writer...