Depressing poem, very good. The way you say your words clearly states how you feel. Well done,keep it up :)

Hey u commented on my song so i thought i'd check some fo ur work out. i like this... its sad but it's good. i feel like this sometimes =| anyways yea nice work. take care. later

I know you didn't mean this to be a song but the way I did it in my head it sounded kick @$$! I'll give it a five but if I read it like a poem the way I usually do it would only get maybe a measily three from me. Good thing I was still in song mode. :)

Awww very powerful but i do hope you dont really think and feel like that everyone has a purpose and im sure yours is a great one :)

It was a very emotional piece, well done. The ending sums up the message of this poem. It flowed nicely too. I think to improve this.. you should add more punctuations.

Nonetheless a good read.

The flow and rhymes here were pretty much flawless. You expressed the emotion quite well too. 5/5

marcella